Recently, the weather is getting hotter and hotter. Who is the “convict”? It might be carbon dioxide, which leads to the global warming. Let's start to discuss it right now. First, global warming can bring about drought because it causes the high temperature. That is to say, the plants and crops mustn’t live without water and definitely, they may die. Another effect is that various creatures would die, such as animals living in the Africa . As far as I am concerned, the melting ice in the North Pole and the South Pole is really a terrible effect on all the human beings on the earth. As the sea level gradually rises, our belongings may one day float on the sea. Last but not the least, I view the global warming as a significant issue that all of us shouldn’t take the plunge to ignore it. What merely we can do right now is bolster our living behaviors which would do damage to the entire surrounding-unless we discover the antidote to the global warming.
1.What are the effects that it brings to the earth? Let's start to discuss it right now.
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2.First, global warming can bring about drought. Why can we so convince? That is because it causes the high temperature.
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3. As far as I am concerned, I think that the melting ice in the North Pole and the South Pole is really a terrible effect on all the human beings on the earth.
-->As far as I am concerned, the melting ice in the North Pole and the South Pole is really a terrible effect on all the human beings on the earth.