2011年6月16日 星期四

Discussing effects-1-revise

    
    Acton is a small town in the Midwest, and it’s a safe, quiet and clean place to live.  One day, a large factory is decided to be built here. Of course, it may make great influence on this small town. Everyone who lives here is both worried and excited. Fortunately, most of the dwellers hold positive attitude toward it.
    The most primary effect is that the industry of this small town would be full of vitality, especially the tourism industry. As a result of that, the residents can improve their living quality instead of living in a poor surrounding. It’s of great importance that the inhabitants are able to broaden their horizon. Having seen the new stuff brought in from foreign countries, they can know what things are catching on in other regions.  
    Needless to say, the factory provides a variety of job opportunities. Consequently, there is no need for the young to move out to look for a job. The unemployment rate may decrease and eventually, robberies would no more happen because people living here can support their family by themselves. That is to say, others property won’t attract them any more.
    To sum up, building a factory in Acton is a good and helpful way for the entire residents. We should view it as a positive effect instead of refusing to accept it.

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  1. The most primary effect is that the industry of this small town would full of vitality, especially the tourism industry.
    -->The most primary effect is that the industry of this small town would be full of vitality, especially the tourism industry.

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