Best of the semester-3

     In my opinion, I’m against the conduct of using animals in laboratory experiments. The behavior above is such a cruel way to treat the innocent animals. They don’t do anything wrong, but we human put them into death by using their bodies to test the curative effects. No one is able to undergo the bitterness, and so are the animals. There’s no denying that every creatures on earth are equal, but how can we regard other creature as being inferior to us? How can we be so arrogant? I can’t get it. Using animals in laboratory is also not ethical. They may suffer from the rays, being turned into a weird figure-that is not reasonable. They even can’t give birth or have their bodies’ right. After they are being used, the researchers would view them as garbage or a not important stuff. Nevertheless, it will bring about horrible effects for the animals died in a condition that it violates the nature. In other words, the food chain will change significantly and do great damage to the whole human beings. To tell the truth, we human are not so much smart as proud. As all the animals get mad and strike back to us, we would deserve the punishment one day.    

Best of the semester-2

    Acton is a harmonious town in the Midwest, and it’s a safe, quiet and clean place to live.  One day, a large factory is decided to be built here. Of course, it may make great influence on this small town. Everyone who lives here is both worried and excited. Fortunately, most of the dwellers hold positive attitude toward it. The most primary effect is that the industry of this small town would be full of vitality, especially the tourism industry. It is because that the residents are capable of improving their living quality instead of residing in an undeveloped surrounding. It’s of critical importance for the inhabitants are able to broaden their horizon. Having seen the imported goods brought in from foreign countries, people can know what things are catching on in other regions.  Needless to say, the factory provides a variety of job vacancies. Consequently, there is no need for the young to move out to search for a job. The unemployment rate may decrease and in the long run, robberies would no more happen because people living here may support their family by themselves. That is to say, others property won’t attract them any more. To sum up, building a factory in Acton is a good and helpful determination for the entire residents. We should view it as a positive effect rather than refuse to accept it.

Best of the semester-1

    Among various kinds of sports, I am in favor of jogging and riding bike in particular. As far as I am concerned, jogging is a good way for people who want to improve their fitness. Similarly, you are capable of riding a bike if you eager to keep fit. With the growth of health consciousness, people are into watching their cholesterol or even fat. And there is no doubt that human beings are able to go jogging or riding a bike in spite of any climates, whether it is a sunny day or a rainy one. Therefore, both jogging and riding a bike soon catch on in the whole world. In addition, we should not neglect what the two sports above are likely to make humanity grow muscles. For example, while jogging or riding a bike, people ought to use their calves and would have muscles if they exercise at pains regularly. As a result, we can come to the conclusion that the two sports above can not only strengthen our body but bolster our figures. Let's get start right now, will we?

Expressing an opinion-2-revise

    With criminals increasing, I’m in favor of using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment. I consider that we should sentence the criminals to death instead of putting them in jails forever, because some of the convicts who are not afraid of being sent into prison. It would commit high crimes if the death penalty was abolished. Although death penalty is a risky measure, it’s of great importance. Without its existence, the crime rate would rapidly rise, and then bad guy would not obey the law any more. Due to the reasons above, the dwellers living in the city must lead a terror-stricken life. They are certainly anxious about their “tomorrow’’ life. Therefore, in my opinion, abolishing the death penalty cannot be practiced. After all, it’s the last line of defense for people to cracking down on villains. In word, I cannot agree with the death penalty anymore.

Expressing an opinion-1-revise

      In my opinion, I’m against the conduct of using animals in laboratory experiments. The behavior above is such a cruel way to treat the innocent animals. They don’t do anything wrong, but we humans put them into death by using their bodies to test the curative effects. No one is able to undergo the bitterness, and so are the animals. There’s no denying that every creatures on earth are equal, but how can we regard other creature as being inferior to us? How can we be so arrogant? I can’t get it. Using animals in laboratory is not ethical. They may suffer from the rays, being turned into a weird firm-that is not reasonable. They even can’t give birth or have their bodies’ right. After they are being used, the researchers would view them as garbage or a not important stuff. Nevertheless, it will bring horrible effects if the animals die in a way that is against the nature. The food chain will change and do great damage to our human beings. To tell the truth, we human are not so much smart as proud. Supposing that all the animals get mad and strike back to us, we would deserve the punishment one day.  

Discussing effects-2-revise

    Recently, the weather is getting hotter and hotter. Who is the “convict”? It might be carbon dioxide, which leads to the global warming. Let's start to discuss it right now. First, global warming can bring about drought because it causes the high temperature. That is to say, the plants and crops mustn’t live without water and definitely, they may die. Another effect is that various creatures would die, such as animals living in the Africa. As far as I am concerned, the melting ice in the North Pole and the South Pole is really a terrible effect on all the human beings on the earth. As the sea level gradually rises, our belongings may one day float on the sea. Last but not the least, I view the global warming as a significant issue that all of us shouldn’t take the plunge to ignore it. What merely we can do right now is bolster our living behaviors which would do damage to the entire surrounding-unless we discover the antidote to the global warming.

Discussing effects-1-revise

    
    Acton is a small town in the Midwest, and it’s a safe, quiet and clean place to live.  One day, a large factory is decided to be built here. Of course, it may make great influence on this small town. Everyone who lives here is both worried and excited. Fortunately, most of the dwellers hold positive attitude toward it.

    The most primary effect is that the industry of this small town would be full of vitality, especially the tourism industry. As a result of that, the residents can improve their living quality instead of living in a poor surrounding. It’s of great importance that the inhabitants are able to broaden their horizon. Having seen the new stuff brought in from foreign countries, they can know what things are catching on in other regions.  

    Needless to say, the factory provides a variety of job opportunities. Consequently, there is no need for the young to move out to look for a job. The unemployment rate may decrease and eventually, robberies would no more happen because people living here can support their family by themselves. That is to say, others property won’t attract them any more.

    To sum up, building a factory in Acton is a good and helpful way for the entire residents. We should view it as a positive effect instead of refusing to accept it.

Discussing cause-1-revise

Moving to a new house must be an important decision in my lifetime. It was about 5 years ago, my parents planned to sell our old house in order to move to a more comfortable environment. As I heard the news, I was shocked for that I had been living here for almost 13 years, and to me, this house was not only precious but meaningful. In spite of my sorrow and depression, my parents made up their mind immediately and in the long run, my adorable home had vanished in my life forever. That is the first reason why moving to a new house means a lot to me. The second reason is that the surrounding where I used to live are familiar with me and my neighbors are so lovely that I don’t want to leave them. However, during the time staying at the old house, I had to share the room with my siblings. As a result, I can’t own my privacy. That was really disturbing. Therefore, it’s of great critical for me to have my own room as moving to a new one. Last but not the least, my parents assured me that if we moved out, we can live in a comfortable and bright life. Although I had to change a lot of behaviors and adapt to the new environment, I still believe that I can live a happy life in my new and dear house. 

Discussing cause-2-revise

    I was a business administration student and my teacher asked me to analyze this case. Last year, on September 5, Michael Williams opened a small music store selling compact discs. However, it was out of business on December 19. According to my research, the music store was situated at the ground floor. As far as I was concerned, the rent of the store might be a great deal of burden to Michael Williams. I doubted that he couldn’t handle it well. Second, there were two big music stores 3 miles away from his store. To tell the truth, I thought that it must draw most of the customers to go there instead of this small music store. Thirdly, most of the most types of the music were hip-hop and rock. Nevertheless, those who entered this store were mostly in the age group from fifty to sixty It must be a bit odd for the elder to listen to such music. The things surprised me most is that the store only opened from Monday to Friday. While the primary customers’ group increased the most on the weekend. From the above reasons, we can discover that Michael Williams didn’t do the market research on running his business. That was why he had to close his store in the long run. I hoped that he can overcome these difficulties and embrace his new life.   

Expressing an opinion-2

    With criminals increasing, I’m in favor of using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment. I consider that we should sentence the criminals to death instead of putting them in jails forever because some of the convicts who are not afraid of being sent into prison would commit high crimes if the death penalty is abolished. Although death penalty is a risky measure, it’s of great importance. Without its existence, the crime rate will rapidly rise, and then the bad guy would not obey the law any more. Due to the reasons above, the dwellers living in the city must lead a terror-stricken life. They are necessarily anxious about their “tomorrow’’ life. Therefore, abolishing the death penalty cannot be practiced. After all, it’s the last line of defense for people to cracking down on villains. In word, I cannot agree with the death penalty anymore.

Expressing an opinion-1

   

    In my opinion, I’m against the conduct of using animals in laboratory experiments. The behavior above is such a cruel way to treat the innocent animals. They don’t do anything wrong, but we human put them into death by using their bodies to test the curative effects. No one is able to undergo the bitterness, so are the animals. There’s no denying that every creatures on earth are equal, but how can we regard the other creatures as being inferior to us? I can’t get it, the people who care about them, too. Using animals in laboratory is not ethical. They may suffer from the rays, being turned into a weird firm-that is not reasonable. They even can’t give birth or have their bodies’ right. After they are being used, the researchers would view them as garbage or a not important stuff. Nevertheless, it will bring horrible effects if the animals died in a way that is against the nature. The food chain will change and do great damage to our human beings. To tell the truth, we human are not so much smart as proud. As one day all the animals get mad and strike back to us, we would deserve the punishment one day.   

discussing effects-2

    Recently, the weather is getting hotter and hotter. Who is the “convict”? It might be carbon dioxide, which leads to the global warming. What are the effects that it brings to the earth? Let's start to discuss it right now. First, global warming can bring about drought. Why can we so convince? That is because it causes the high temperature. That is to say, the plants and crops mustn’t live without water and definitely, they may die. Another effect is that various creatures would die, such as animals living in the Africa. As far as I am concerned, I think that the melting ice in the North Pole and the South Pole is really a terrible effect on all the human beings on the earth. As the sea level gradually rises, our belongings may one day float on the sea. Last but not the least, I view the global warming as a significant issue that all of us shouldn’t take the plunge to ignore it. What merely we can do right now is bolster our living behaviors which would do damage to the entire surrounding-unless we discover the antidote to the global warming.

discussing effects-1

   

    Acton is a small town in the Midwest, and it’s a safe, quiet and clean place to live.  One day, a large factory is decided to be built here. Of course, it may make great influence on this small town. Everyone who lives here is both worried and excited. Fortunately, most of the dwellers hold positive attitude toward it.

    The most primary effect is that the industry of this small town would full of vitality, especially the tourism industry. As a result of that, the residents can improve their living quality instead of living in a poor surrounding. It’s of great importance that the inhabitants are able to boarden their horizon. Having seen the new stuff brought in from foreign countries, they can know what things are catching on in other regions.  

    Needless to say, the factory provides a variety of job opportunities. Consequently, there is no need for the young to move out to look for a job. The unemployment rate may decrease and eventually, robberies would no more happen because people living here can support their family by themselves. That is to say, others property won’t attract them any more.

    To sum up, building a factory in Acton is a good and helpful way for the entire residents. We should view it as a positive effect instead of refusing to accept it.

Contrasting-2 revised

I wanted to hire a new English instructor for my school and so far I had received two resumes. To my mind, I thought both Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines had great educational backgrounds and working experiences. But eventually I chose the former. Why did I make this decision? Follow my words and you will understand. First of all, Lynn Whitnall only studied in New York University. Nevertheless, Debra Fines had already studied in three excellent colleges for more than seven years. Secondly, Debra Fines used to be an English Instructor for three years, while Lynn Whitnall was much more experienced than her. Third, I need someone who is really skilled in English verb tense and Lynn Whitnall can live up to my expectation. While Debra Fines can only speak different kinds of languages but that was not what I really wanted. In this way, I believed that Lynn Whitnall was the best candidates for this position. In short, she would be our school's English instructor and I hoped to partner with her happily

Comparing-3 revised

Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging and riding bike in particular. As far as I am concerned, jogging is a good way for people who want to go on a diet. Similarly, you can ride a bike if you eager to lose your weight. With the growth of health consciousness, people are into watching their cholesterol or fat. And there is no doubt that human beings are able to go jogging or riding a bike in spite of any climates, whether it is a sunny day or a rainy one. Therefore, both jogging and riding a bike soon catch on in the whole world. In addition, we should not neglect what the two above sports are likely to make humanity grow muscles. For example, while jogging or riding a bike, people ought to use their calves and would have muscle if they exercise regularly. As a result, we can come to the conclusion that the two sports above can not only strengthen your body but bolster your health. Let's get start right now, will we?

Discussing Cause-2

Last year, on September 5, Michael Williams opened a small music store selling compact discs. However, it was out of business on December 19. I was a business administration student and my teacher asked me to analyze this case.

According to my research, the music store was situated at the ground floor. As far as I was concerned, the rent of the store might be a great deal of burden to Michael Williams. I doubted that he couldn’t handle it at all. Second, there were two big music stores 3 miles away from his store. To tell the truth, I thought that it must draw most of the costumers to go there instead of this small music store.

Thirdly, most of the music was hip-hop and rock. Nevertheless, those who entered this store were mostly the ageing from fifty to sixty. It must be a bit odd for the elder to listen to such music like that. The things surprised me most is that the store only opened on Monday to Friday. While the primary customers’ level increased the most during the weekend. It was a kind of weird, wasn’t it?

From the above reasons, we can discover that Michael Williams didn’t make great efforts on running his business. That was why he had to close his store in the long run. I hoped that he can dace this difficulties and embrace his new life.     

Discussing Cause-1

Moving to a new house must be an important decision in my lifetime. It was about 5years ago, my parents planned to sell out our old house in order to move into a more comfortable environment. As I heard the news, I was shocked for I had been living here for almost 13years, and to me, this house was not only precious but meaningful. In spite of my sorrow and depression, my parents made up their mind immediately and in the long run, my adorable home, distinguishing in my life forever.

That is the first reason why moving to a new house means a lot to me. The second reason is that the surrounding that I used to live is familiar to me and my neighbors are so lovely that I don’t want to leave them.

During the time I stayed at the old house, I had to share the room with my siblings. As a result, I can’t own my privacy. That was really disturbing. Therefore, it’s of great critical for me to have my own room as moving to a new one. Last but not the least, my parents assured me that if we moved out, we can live in a comfortable and bright life.

Although I had to change a lot of behaviors and adapt to the new environment, I still believe that I can live a happy life in my new and dear house.