2011年5月18日 星期三

Comparing-2 ~revised


    John Adams and Thomas Jefferson, who were both important Americans, had the same biographical information. There have something alike under this paragraph. First of all, John Adams played a significant role in the American Revolution. Similarly, Thomas Jefferson played a significant role in the American Revolution. Second, both of them were delegated to the Continental Congress. Besides, John Adams, who was one of the signers of Declaration of Independence, is similar to Thomas Jefferson. Third, John Adams used to be the president of U.S. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson used to be the president of U.S. Both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson studied and practiced law. Last but not the least, both of them died on July 4, 1826. From the above details, you can know that John Adams and Thomas Jefferson had done a great many things which would be admired by their offspring.

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