I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School . During my academic years, I have served as a class secretary for one and half a year since art is one of my interest. Although sometimes it is difficult to reach an agreement with my partners, I still try my best to cooperate with them. By being in charge of this position, I got lots of precious experiences, becoming a more sober-minded and responsible person. When I am a sophomore, I realized that only Japanese can arouse my interest-- how amazing it is that everything could be expressed by the 50 letters in the alphabet! With a view to improving my abilities such as reading or listening Japanese words, I studied them every day. I believe that the more I study, the better I would become. I have always believed in the saying “You can only have one dream, but if you can do it right, once is enough.” In order to fulfill my dream—studying in Japan , I participated in Japanese club which help me gain many useful and valuable knowledge. With my teacher’s encouragement, I took the General English Proficiency Test and passed the intermediate level. In NTCVS, not only have I enhanced my English and Japanese ability, but I have also understood the importance of working in unity and close cooperation. Despite the fact that I always have to face lots of challenge in my school life, I am in great confidence that “Spare the rod and spoil the child “. I hope that one day I can be the master of my own fortune and have the courage to overcome difficulties.
English and Japanese ability
回覆刪除>> English and Japanese abilities
lots of challenge
>>lots of challenges
很順暢沒什麼問題
還善用諺語很好喔~
During my academic years, I have served as a class secretary for one and half a year since art is one of my interest.
回覆刪除→感覺有點接的太快,這句應該是說英文演講、表演八!!!
我覺得可以前面再接一句,不然會覺得突兀~
sophomore→senior
With my teacher’s encouragement, I took the General English Proficiency Test and passed the intermediate level.
→這句可以變成新的一段,不然前面是說日文,這樣接怪怪的!!!
用很多名言!!!感覺很厲害耶~
回覆刪除XD~
During my academic years, I have served as a class secretary for one and half a year since art is one of my interest. –interests 好像可以加s
回覆刪除I participated in Japanese club which help me gain many useful and valuable knowledge.
-Which helps
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要分段唷~不然看起來很多~
回覆刪除Although sometimes it is difficult to reach an agreement with my partners, I still try my best to cooperate with them. By being in charge of this position, I got lots of precious experiences, becoming a more sober-minded and responsible person.這段時態要一致唷!!
I realized that only Japanese can arouse my interest你這句換我贊同到不能在贊同了OAOQQQ
日本態棒了(>_<)--->離題中..
整體很棒唷
我好喜歡日本:">