In winter of 1994, a cute girl was born in Tainan . That is me. My name is Wu Hsiao-Yun. My adorable family is three generations under the same roof. My father, who is an open-minded person full of sense of humor, gives us freedom of choice. My mother is a housewife. She always aims at the development of my personality. I have a positive perspective toward life for I was grown up in such a lovely home. I am the eldest child of three. Since I am the eldest one, it makes me to become an independent, responsible and mature person. In spite of the fact that my family is not very rich, my parents try their best to let our life get better. Perhaps my family is not perfect in every aspect; I am still content with what I have now.
結局感覺到很努力生活的感覺,
回覆刪除你可以寫寫你其他的個性,
感覺好像是因為是姐姐,
所以造成你很負責任。
因為你寫說是three generations
我覺得也可以說說奶奶之類的
其實我覺得寫的很好!!
XD~
In winter of 1994
回覆刪除>>In the winter of 1994
an open-minded person full of
>>an open-minded person fulling of
a positive perspective toward life
>>a positive perspective on life
My father, who is an open-minded person full of sense of humor, gives us freedom of choice.
回覆刪除-My father, who is an open-minded person fulling of humor, gives us freedon of choice.
Since I am the eldest one, it makes me to become an independent, responsible and mature person.
-it makes me become~
In winter of 1994-->In the winter of 1994,
回覆刪除gives us freedom of choice-->giving us freedom of choice
it makes me to become an independent,-->
it makes me become an independent~
很順暢唷^o^